Hello
My name is Chamroun I want to talk about my birthday.
My birthday is tomorrow I wish my family good luck good health and success in my family life. I wish get a wish from my family and friend and Sokmao also. Because sokmao never give a wish for me . sokmao is my friend too. when my birthday but all my friend give a wish for me. and I want a ring and a necklace and I wish my sponsor looks at my blog and she write Email to me for my birthday. If it true it will good for me. If my sponsor cannot wrote something for my birthday I thing she not remember my birthday . I want her come when my birthday .
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Chamroun! Happy Birthday! You are now a teenager. I hope you get all your wishes on your birthday.
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Chamroun,
ReplyDeleteGood job on this one, and happy birthday!
Your writing is getting more personal - you're not afraid to say things about yourself. What you want, what you want for your friends, etc. This is good. We are all unique and we express that through our writing.
Your topic is "My Birthday". What else can we say about our birthday? Here are some hints to get you writing more:
What will you do for your birthday? Will you have a party? Who will come and what will they do?
Why doesn't Sokmao give a wish to you? I think I saw him singing to you this morning during Core English! =)
What do you usually do for your birthday in Cambodia? Remember, many readers are foreigners - we don't know what a typical Cambodian birthday is like! Tell us more!
Maybe you should email your blog to your sponsor...
Keep writing!
Teacher Robbie
Chamroun,
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday!
Even though I am not your sponsor, I hope you had a wonderful day. I see your picture every day with all the kids from TGC. We miss you,
Karen Chet and Courtney Opalka