During Pchumben I go to my home in Phnom Penh because I miss my mother, father, sister, grandmother. When I go to my home I go to pagoda to take the rice and food for someone who died like my grandmother and grandfather they died in the Khmer Rouge. I hate Khmer Rouge because they know about how to study and how to make the people healthy but then Khmer Rouge killed them. Now I want to talk about Pchumben again and continue. And then I come back from pagoda I eat rice and I drink coca cola and I sleep at afternoon adn eening I go for a walk it so happy and I see a lot of people and a lot of moto, cars, and I came back. I sleep and then at the morning I help my mom selling something like drink, cake, noodle. Something for makeup and my cousins come and visit my mother. I and my sister play with my brother cousins it is very happy. My mother buy clothes for me and shoe and also buy for my sister too. When I go back from market I drink a water.
Is The End.
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Hi Chamroun- your English is very good! This holiday sounds like a lot of fun. When is Pchumben? How do you travel to Phnom Penh from Siem Reap. How old is your sister? I see you like to drink coca cola - Robbie's little brother loves to drink coca cola. I look forward to reading your next entry!
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I really like that you've told me a lot about Pchumben holiday. As a foreigner, I now know much more about the holiday from reading your blog. Your writing is interesting and I can learn a lot from it. Good work!
I think you should be more careful about how you organize your thoughts. In the middle of your writing, you begin talking about the Khmer Rouge and why you don't like them. This is very interesting writing, but in the middle of writing about Pchumben, it interrupts the flow of ideas. Perhaps your next blog post should be about the Khmer Rouge? It seems like there is a lot you have to say, and I think the topic needs its own entry.
Keep writing Chamroun! You're a great author!
-Teacher Robbie
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